Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions
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texte = This is a cryptographically signed message in MIME format. --------------ms070000090002060509080600 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Donovan, Perhaps a more clear 3rd sentence would be appropriate. I would avoid referring to WebDNA as "It". Before: "It was released in 1995 and the name was registered as a trademark in 1998.[2] WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation." After: Released in 1995, the name was registered as a trademark in 1998.[2] WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation. Marc Donovan Brooke wrote: > Hello Guys/Gals, > > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on: > > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox > > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what > needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before > going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or > deletion. ;-) > > Donovan > > > -- ------------------------------------------- Marc Thompson Software Engineer Office of Information Technology University of Utah 801.585.9264 marc.thompson@utah.edu ------------------------------------------- --------------ms070000090002060509080600 Content-Type: application/x-pkcs7-signature; name="smime.p7s" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="smime.p7s" Content-Description: S/MIME Cryptographic Signature MIAGCSqGSIb3DQEHAqCAMIACAQExCzAJBgUrDgMCGgUAMIAGCSqGSIb3DQEHAQAAoIIIyTCC Ar8wggIooAMCAQICEBsJjtdroK6bD6QFOjpu3bIwDQYJKoZIhvcNAQEFBQAwYjELMAkGA1UE BhMCWkExJTAjBgNVBAoTHFRoYXd0ZSBDb25zdWx0aW5nIChQdHkpIEx0ZC4xLDAqBgNVBAMT I1RoYXd0ZSBQZXJzb25hbCBGcmVlbWFpbCBJc3N1aW5nIENBMB4XDTA5MDIyMzE5MzkyNVoX DTEwMDIyMzE5MzkyNVowgYoxETAPBgNVBAQTCFRob21wc29uMQ0wCwYDVQQqEwRNYXJjMRYw FAYDVQQDEw1NYXJjIFRob21wc29uMScwJQYJKoZIhvcNAQkBFhhtdGhvbXBzb25AbWVkaWEu dXRhaC5lZHUxJTAjBgkqhkiG9w0BCQEWFm1hcmMudGhvbXBzb25AdXRhaC5lZHUwgZ8wDQYJ KoZIhvcNAQEBBQADgY0AMIGJAoGBAM59JRdQxO5rxD9dkmKAk/FobjsVKTA+u4e8lYfiMt3Z RIpBx5JX3h9h7j2JCZDPbB5s/jxg+DoL4oyL8nRZ5WI03nkWsizq4LzvPCudQjos5hflS+7s QNBUHJoUtQ+hX0vp4QmRs7qDlZ+zB3SgBz8YGOcQm1uDf++BS7wv89VFAgMBAAGjTTBLMDsG A1UdEQQ0MDKBGG10aG9tcHNvbkBtZWRpYS51dGFoLmVkdYEWbWFyYy50aG9tcHNvbkB1dGFo LmVkdTAMBgNVHRMBAf8EAjAAMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBBQUAA4GBAC8toPH9c2T1yBdVk/3XP3xe XtECE1Kin0w50pjBajicub5R6pz9jc+NhlpNPmcqVj3VVimTyFeFY97p3BrcjW3qPFp/KM5O abdIz4gLDT0aMzdjI0qo59DolQGSlPxRPU6RqMJRIJ0X75EhDhCgpDWy7UtVPInv5T4rAkLP skeBMIICvzCCAiigAwIBAgIQGwmO12ugrpsPpAU6Om7dsjANBgkqhkiG9w0BAQUFADBiMQsw CQYDVQQGEwJaQTElMCMGA1UEChMcVGhhd3RlIENvbnN1bHRpbmcgKFB0eSkgTHRkLjEsMCoG A1UEAxMjVGhhd3RlIFBlcnNvbmFsIEZyZWVtYWlsIElzc3VpbmcgQ0EwHhcNMDkwMjIzMTkz OTI1WhcNMTAwMjIzMTkzOTI1WjCBijERMA8GA1UEBBMIVGhvbXBzb24xDTALBgNVBCoTBE1h cmMxFjAUBgNVBAMTDU1hcmMgVGhvbXBzb24xJzAlBgkqhkiG9w0BCQEWGG10aG9tcHNvbkBt ZWRpYS51dGFoLmVkdTElMCMGCSqGSIb3DQEJARYWbWFyYy50aG9tcHNvbkB1dGFoLmVkdTCB nzANBgkqhkiG9w0BAQEFAAOBjQAwgYkCgYEAzn0lF1DE7mvEP12SYoCT8WhuOxUpMD67h7yV h+Iy3dlEikHHklfeH2HuPYkJkM9sHmz+PGD4OgvijIvydFnlYjTeeRayLOrgvO88K51COizm F+VL7uxA0FQcmhS1D6FfS+nhCZGzuoOVn7MHdKAHPxgY5xCbW4N/74FLvC/z1UUCAwEAAaNN MEswOwYDVR0RBDQwMoEYbXRob21wc29uQG1lZGlhLnV0YWguZWR1gRZtYXJjLnRob21wc29u QHV0YWguZWR1MAwGA1UdEwEB/wQCMAAwDQYJKoZIhvcNAQEFBQADgYEALy2g8f1zZPXIF1WT /dc/fF5e0QITUqKfTDnSmMFqOJy5vlHqnP2Nz42GWk0+ZypWPdVWKZPIV4Vj3uncGtyNbeo8 Wn8ozk5pt0jPiAsNPRozN2MjSqjn0OiVAZKU/FE9TpGowlEgnRfvkSEOEKCkNbLtS1U8ie/l PisCQs+yR4EwggM/MIICqKADAgECAgENMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBBQUAMIHRMQswCQYDVQQGEwJa QTEVMBMGA1UECBMMV2VzdGVybiBDYXBlMRIwEAYDVQQHEwlDYXBlIFRvd24xGjAYBgNVBAoT EVRoYXd0ZSBDb25zdWx0aW5nMSgwJgYDVQQLEx9DZXJ0aWZpY2F0aW9uIFNlcnZpY2VzIERp dmlzaW9uMSQwIgYDVQQDExtUaGF3dGUgUGVyc29uYWwgRnJlZW1haWwgQ0ExKzApBgkqhkiG 9w0BCQEWHHBlcnNvbmFsLWZyZWVtYWlsQHRoYXd0ZS5jb20wHhcNMDMwNzE3MDAwMDAwWhcN MTMwNzE2MjM1OTU5WjBiMQswCQYDVQQGEwJaQTElMCMGA1UEChMcVGhhd3RlIENvbnN1bHRp bmcgKFB0eSkgTHRkLjEsMCoGA1UEAxMjVGhhd3RlIFBlcnNvbmFsIEZyZWVtYWlsIElzc3Vp bmcgQ0EwgZ8wDQYJKoZIhvcNAQEBBQADgY0AMIGJAoGBAMSmPFVzVftOucqZWh5owHUEcJ3f 6f+jHuy9zfVb8hp2vX8MOmHyv1HOAdTlUAow1wJjWiyJFXCO3cnwK4Vaqj9xVsuvPAsH5/Ef kTYkKhPPK9Xzgnc9A74r/rsYPge/QIACZNenprufZdHFKlSFD0gEf6e20TxhBEAeZBlyYLf7 AgMBAAGjgZQwgZEwEgYDVR0TAQH/BAgwBgEB/wIBADBDBgNVHR8EPDA6MDigNqA0hjJodHRw Oi8vY3JsLnRoYXd0ZS5jb20vVGhhd3RlUGVyc29uYWxGcmVlbWFpbENBLmNybDALBgNVHQ8E BAMCAQYwKQYDVR0RBCIwIKQeMBwxGjAYBgNVBAMTEVByaXZhdGVMYWJlbDItMTM4MA0GCSqG SIb3DQEBBQUAA4GBAEiM0VCD6gsuzA2jZqxnD3+vrL7CF6FDlpSdf0whuPg2H6otnzYvwPQc UCCTcDz9reFhYsPZOhl+hLGZGwDFGguCdJ4lUJRix9sncVcljd2pnDmOjCBPZV+V2vf3h9bG CE6u9uo05RAaWzVNd+NWIXiC3CEZNd4ksdMdRv9dX2VPMYIC8DCCAuwCAQEwdjBiMQswCQYD VQQGEwJaQTElMCMGA1UEChMcVGhhd3RlIENvbnN1bHRpbmcgKFB0eSkgTHRkLjEsMCoGA1UE AxMjVGhhd3RlIFBlcnNvbmFsIEZyZWVtYWlsIElzc3VpbmcgQ0ECEBsJjtdroK6bD6QFOjpu 3bIwCQYFKw4DAhoFAKCCAdAwGAYJKoZIhvcNAQkDMQsGCSqGSIb3DQEHATAcBgkqhkiG9w0B CQUxDxcNMDkxMTA0MTcwMDA5WjAjBgkqhkiG9w0BCQQxFgQUy8bITB7YMbeJz7/O/XXJ3iMf wcEwXwYJKoZIhvcNAQkPMVIwUDALBglghkgBZQMEAQIwCgYIKoZIhvcNAwcwDgYIKoZIhvcN AwICAgCAMA0GCCqGSIb3DQMCAgFAMAcGBSsOAwIHMA0GCCqGSIb3DQMCAgEoMIGFBgkrBgEE AYI3EAQxeDB2MGIxCzAJBgNVBAYTAlpBMSUwIwYDVQQKExxUaGF3dGUgQ29uc3VsdGluZyAo UHR5KSBMdGQuMSwwKgYDVQQDEyNUaGF3dGUgUGVyc29uYWwgRnJlZW1haWwgSXNzdWluZyBD QQIQGwmO12ugrpsPpAU6Om7dsjCBhwYLKoZIhvcNAQkQAgsxeKB2MGIxCzAJBgNVBAYTAlpB MSUwIwYDVQQKExxUaGF3dGUgQ29uc3VsdGluZyAoUHR5KSBMdGQuMSwwKgYDVQQDEyNUaGF3 dGUgUGVyc29uYWwgRnJlZW1haWwgSXNzdWluZyBDQQIQGwmO12ugrpsPpAU6Om7dsjANBgkq hkiG9w0BAQEFAASBgEv/jesS8+u/Mb4jvPUbtPX1BPrJiAe6zmnI4nuT7MdbWnkalHAiqWZF 1QlnO/Hnsr2GQWEY/iD3me7yBLV3uqvj4z5ldmohCOS/V4DgluDPhHpjejhpF6p5p6K52N/Z t3FRkuebw6eUwISNhDSB3WIXZTbYYxQqNqqklL4EVKdLAAAAAAAA --------------ms070000090002060509080600--
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This is a cryptographically signed message in MIME format. --------------ms070000090002060509080600 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Donovan, Perhaps a more clear 3rd sentence would be appropriate. I would avoid referring to WebDNA as "It". Before: "It was released in 1995 and the name was registered as a trademark in 1998.[2] WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation." After: Released in 1995, the name was registered as a trademark in 1998.[2] WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation. Marc Donovan Brooke wrote: > Hello Guys/Gals, > > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on: > > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox > > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what > needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before > going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or > deletion. ;-) > > Donovan > > > -- ------------------------------------------- Marc Thompson Software Engineer Office of Information Technology University of Utah 801.585.9264 marc.thompson@utah.edu ------------------------------------------- --------------ms070000090002060509080600 Content-Type: application/x-pkcs7-signature; name="smime.p7s" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="smime.p7s" Content-Description: S/MIME Cryptographic Signature MIAGCSqGSIb3DQEHAqCAMIACAQExCzAJBgUrDgMCGgUAMIAGCSqGSIb3DQEHAQAAoIIIyTCC Ar8wggIooAMCAQICEBsJjtdroK6bD6QFOjpu3bIwDQYJKoZIhvcNAQEFBQAwYjELMAkGA1UE BhMCWkExJTAjBgNVBAoTHFRoYXd0ZSBDb25zdWx0aW5nIChQdHkpIEx0ZC4xLDAqBgNVBAMT I1RoYXd0ZSBQZXJzb25hbCBGcmVlbWFpbCBJc3N1aW5nIENBMB4XDTA5MDIyMzE5MzkyNVoX DTEwMDIyMzE5MzkyNVowgYoxETAPBgNVBAQTCFRob21wc29uMQ0wCwYDVQQqEwRNYXJjMRYw FAYDVQQDEw1NYXJjIFRob21wc29uMScwJQYJKoZIhvcNAQkBFhhtdGhvbXBzb25AbWVkaWEu dXRhaC5lZHUxJTAjBgkqhkiG9w0BCQEWFm1hcmMudGhvbXBzb25AdXRhaC5lZHUwgZ8wDQYJ KoZIhvcNAQEBBQADgY0AMIGJAoGBAM59JRdQxO5rxD9dkmKAk/FobjsVKTA+u4e8lYfiMt3Z RIpBx5JX3h9h7j2JCZDPbB5s/jxg+DoL4oyL8nRZ5WI03nkWsizq4LzvPCudQjos5hflS+7s QNBUHJoUtQ+hX0vp4QmRs7qDlZ+zB3SgBz8YGOcQm1uDf++BS7wv89VFAgMBAAGjTTBLMDsG A1UdEQQ0MDKBGG10aG9tcHNvbkBtZWRpYS51dGFoLmVkdYEWbWFyYy50aG9tcHNvbkB1dGFo LmVkdTAMBgNVHRMBAf8EAjAAMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBBQUAA4GBAC8toPH9c2T1yBdVk/3XP3xe XtECE1Kin0w50pjBajicub5R6pz9jc+NhlpNPmcqVj3VVimTyFeFY97p3BrcjW3qPFp/KM5O abdIz4gLDT0aMzdjI0qo59DolQGSlPxRPU6RqMJRIJ0X75EhDhCgpDWy7UtVPInv5T4rAkLP skeBMIICvzCCAiigAwIBAgIQGwmO12ugrpsPpAU6Om7dsjANBgkqhkiG9w0BAQUFADBiMQsw CQYDVQQGEwJaQTElMCMGA1UEChMcVGhhd3RlIENvbnN1bHRpbmcgKFB0eSkgTHRkLjEsMCoG A1UEAxMjVGhhd3RlIFBlcnNvbmFsIEZyZWVtYWlsIElzc3VpbmcgQ0EwHhcNMDkwMjIzMTkz OTI1WhcNMTAwMjIzMTkzOTI1WjCBijERMA8GA1UEBBMIVGhvbXBzb24xDTALBgNVBCoTBE1h cmMxFjAUBgNVBAMTDU1hcmMgVGhvbXBzb24xJzAlBgkqhkiG9w0BCQEWGG10aG9tcHNvbkBt ZWRpYS51dGFoLmVkdTElMCMGCSqGSIb3DQEJARYWbWFyYy50aG9tcHNvbkB1dGFoLmVkdTCB nzANBgkqhkiG9w0BAQEFAAOBjQAwgYkCgYEAzn0lF1DE7mvEP12SYoCT8WhuOxUpMD67h7yV h+Iy3dlEikHHklfeH2HuPYkJkM9sHmz+PGD4OgvijIvydFnlYjTeeRayLOrgvO88K51COizm F+VL7uxA0FQcmhS1D6FfS+nhCZGzuoOVn7MHdKAHPxgY5xCbW4N/74FLvC/z1UUCAwEAAaNN MEswOwYDVR0RBDQwMoEYbXRob21wc29uQG1lZGlhLnV0YWguZWR1gRZtYXJjLnRob21wc29u QHV0YWguZWR1MAwGA1UdEwEB/wQCMAAwDQYJKoZIhvcNAQEFBQADgYEALy2g8f1zZPXIF1WT /dc/fF5e0QITUqKfTDnSmMFqOJy5vlHqnP2Nz42GWk0+ZypWPdVWKZPIV4Vj3uncGtyNbeo8 Wn8ozk5pt0jPiAsNPRozN2MjSqjn0OiVAZKU/FE9TpGowlEgnRfvkSEOEKCkNbLtS1U8ie/l PisCQs+yR4EwggM/MIICqKADAgECAgENMA0GCSqGSIb3DQEBBQUAMIHRMQswCQYDVQQGEwJa QTEVMBMGA1UECBMMV2VzdGVybiBDYXBlMRIwEAYDVQQHEwlDYXBlIFRvd24xGjAYBgNVBAoT EVRoYXd0ZSBDb25zdWx0aW5nMSgwJgYDVQQLEx9DZXJ0aWZpY2F0aW9uIFNlcnZpY2VzIERp dmlzaW9uMSQwIgYDVQQDExtUaGF3dGUgUGVyc29uYWwgRnJlZW1haWwgQ0ExKzApBgkqhkiG 9w0BCQEWHHBlcnNvbmFsLWZyZWVtYWlsQHRoYXd0ZS5jb20wHhcNMDMwNzE3MDAwMDAwWhcN MTMwNzE2MjM1OTU5WjBiMQswCQYDVQQGEwJaQTElMCMGA1UEChMcVGhhd3RlIENvbnN1bHRp bmcgKFB0eSkgTHRkLjEsMCoGA1UEAxMjVGhhd3RlIFBlcnNvbmFsIEZyZWVtYWlsIElzc3Vp bmcgQ0EwgZ8wDQYJKoZIhvcNAQEBBQADgY0AMIGJAoGBAMSmPFVzVftOucqZWh5owHUEcJ3f 6f+jHuy9zfVb8hp2vX8MOmHyv1HOAdTlUAow1wJjWiyJFXCO3cnwK4Vaqj9xVsuvPAsH5/Ef kTYkKhPPK9Xzgnc9A74r/rsYPge/QIACZNenprufZdHFKlSFD0gEf6e20TxhBEAeZBlyYLf7 AgMBAAGjgZQwgZEwEgYDVR0TAQH/BAgwBgEB/wIBADBDBgNVHR8EPDA6MDigNqA0hjJodHRw Oi8vY3JsLnRoYXd0ZS5jb20vVGhhd3RlUGVyc29uYWxGcmVlbWFpbENBLmNybDALBgNVHQ8E BAMCAQYwKQYDVR0RBCIwIKQeMBwxGjAYBgNVBAMTEVByaXZhdGVMYWJlbDItMTM4MA0GCSqG SIb3DQEBBQUAA4GBAEiM0VCD6gsuzA2jZqxnD3+vrL7CF6FDlpSdf0whuPg2H6otnzYvwPQc UCCTcDz9reFhYsPZOhl+hLGZGwDFGguCdJ4lUJRix9sncVcljd2pnDmOjCBPZV+V2vf3h9bG CE6u9uo05RAaWzVNd+NWIXiC3CEZNd4ksdMdRv9dX2VPMYIC8DCCAuwCAQEwdjBiMQswCQYD VQQGEwJaQTElMCMGA1UEChMcVGhhd3RlIENvbnN1bHRpbmcgKFB0eSkgTHRkLjEsMCoGA1UE AxMjVGhhd3RlIFBlcnNvbmFsIEZyZWVtYWlsIElzc3VpbmcgQ0ECEBsJjtdroK6bD6QFOjpu 3bIwCQYFKw4DAhoFAKCCAdAwGAYJKoZIhvcNAQkDMQsGCSqGSIb3DQEHATAcBgkqhkiG9w0B CQUxDxcNMDkxMTA0MTcwMDA5WjAjBgkqhkiG9w0BCQQxFgQUy8bITB7YMbeJz7/O/XXJ3iMf wcEwXwYJKoZIhvcNAQkPMVIwUDALBglghkgBZQMEAQIwCgYIKoZIhvcNAwcwDgYIKoZIhvcN AwICAgCAMA0GCCqGSIb3DQMCAgFAMAcGBSsOAwIHMA0GCCqGSIb3DQMCAgEoMIGFBgkrBgEE AYI3EAQxeDB2MGIxCzAJBgNVBAYTAlpBMSUwIwYDVQQKExxUaGF3dGUgQ29uc3VsdGluZyAo UHR5KSBMdGQuMSwwKgYDVQQDEyNUaGF3dGUgUGVyc29uYWwgRnJlZW1haWwgSXNzdWluZyBD QQIQGwmO12ugrpsPpAU6Om7dsjCBhwYLKoZIhvcNAQkQAgsxeKB2MGIxCzAJBgNVBAYTAlpB MSUwIwYDVQQKExxUaGF3dGUgQ29uc3VsdGluZyAoUHR5KSBMdGQuMSwwKgYDVQQDEyNUaGF3 dGUgUGVyc29uYWwgRnJlZW1haWwgSXNzdWluZyBDQQIQGwmO12ugrpsPpAU6Om7dsjANBgkq hkiG9w0BAQEFAASBgEv/jesS8+u/Mb4jvPUbtPX1BPrJiAe6zmnI4nuT7MdbWnkalHAiqWZF 1QlnO/Hnsr2GQWEY/iD3me7yBLV3uqvj4z5ldmohCOS/V4DgluDPhHpjejhpF6p5p6K52N/Z t3FRkuebw6eUwISNhDSB3WIXZTbYYxQqNqqklL4EVKdLAAAAAAAA --------------ms070000090002060509080600--
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