Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions

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It keeps the original formatting.
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texte = --Apple-Mail-32--122961619 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252; format=flowed; delsp=yes Overall quite good. A few nitpicks... In the Terminology section: > Paramaters can be included in many of the Tags, Contexts or Commands. Should be "Parameters". In the History section: > WebCatalog and Pacific Coast Software was purchased "was" should be "were" > set such as Object oriented programming using the [function] and =20 > [scope] It's not really Object-oriented (we're not declaring classes with =20 embedded data and method handlers). These are more akin to Structured =20= Programming concepts. > opted for the more supported solutions Perhaps=85 "opted for more actively supported solutions" > the developers of WebDNA that revived the language I would use "who revived the language" instead of "that". Brian Fries BrainScan Software On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote: > Hello Guys/Gals, > > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on: > > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox > > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what > needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before > going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or > deletion. ;-) > > Donovan > > > > --=20 > Donovan Brooke > Euca Design Center > [Practical-Ethical-Efficient] > www.euca.us > egg.bz > artglass-forum.com > --------------------------------------------------------- > This message is sent to you because you are subscribed to > the mailing list . > To unsubscribe, E-mail to: > archives: http://mail.webdna.us/list/talk@webdna.us > old archives: http://dev.webdna.us/TalkListArchive/ > Bug Reporting: = http://forum.webdna.us/eucabb.html?page=3Dtopics&category=3D288 --Apple-Mail-32--122961619 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=windows-1252
Overall quite good. A few nitpicks...

In the = Terminology section:

Paramaters can be included in = many of the Tags, Contexts or = Commands.

Should be = "Parameters".


In the History = section:

WebCatalog and Pacific Coast Software was = purchased

"was" should be = "were"

set such as Object oriented = programming using the [function] and = [scope] 

It's not really = Object-oriented (we're not declaring classes with embedded data and = method handlers). These are more akin to Structured Programming = concepts.

opted for the more supported = solutions

Perhaps=85 "opted for = more actively supported solutions"

the developers of = WebDNA that revived the language

I = would use "who revived the language" instead of = "that".


Brian = Fries
BrainScan Software

On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote:

Hello = Guys/Gals,

Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been = working on:

http://en= .wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox

If any of you = are good with grammar, please let me know what
needs corrected. It = has to be as polished as can be before
going "live" to avoid spammy = remarks from Wiki admins and/or
deletion. = ;-)

Donovan



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  1. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  2. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  3. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Patrick McCormick 2009)
  4. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Christer Olsson 2009)
  5. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Frank Nordberg 2009)
  6. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  7. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Grant Hulbert 2009)
  8. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  9. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Stuart Tremain 2009)
  10. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Christer Olsson 2009)
  11. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Dan Strong 2009)
  12. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Grant Hulbert 2009)
  13. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  14. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  15. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Tana Adams 2009)
  16. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Brian Fries 2009)
  17. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  18. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  19. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  20. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  21. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Marc Thompson 2009)
  22. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  23. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  24. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Marc Thompson 2009)
  25. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Marc Thompson 2009)
  26. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Marc Thompson 2009)
  27. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  28. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  29. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
  30. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Marc Thompson 2009)
  31. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Toby Cox 2009)
  32. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Matthew Bohne 2009)
  33. Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Dan Strong 2009)
  34. [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions (Donovan Brooke 2009)
--Apple-Mail-32--122961619 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252; format=flowed; delsp=yes Overall quite good. A few nitpicks... In the Terminology section: > Paramaters can be included in many of the Tags, Contexts or Commands. Should be "Parameters". In the History section: > WebCatalog and Pacific Coast Software was purchased "was" should be "were" > set such as Object oriented programming using the [function] and =20 > [scope] It's not really Object-oriented (we're not declaring classes with =20 embedded data and method handlers). These are more akin to Structured =20= Programming concepts. > opted for the more supported solutions Perhaps=85 "opted for more actively supported solutions" > the developers of WebDNA that revived the language I would use "who revived the language" instead of "that". Brian Fries BrainScan Software On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote: > Hello Guys/Gals, > > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on: > > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox > > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what > needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before > going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or > deletion. ;-) > > Donovan > > > > --=20 > Donovan Brooke > Euca Design Center > [Practical-Ethical-Efficient] > www.euca.us > egg.bz > artglass-forum.com > --------------------------------------------------------- > This message is sent to you because you are subscribed to > the mailing list . > To unsubscribe, E-mail to: > archives: http://mail.webdna.us/list/talk@webdna.us > old archives: http://dev.webdna.us/TalkListArchive/ > Bug Reporting: = http://forum.webdna.us/eucabb.html?page=3Dtopics&category=3D288 --Apple-Mail-32--122961619 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=windows-1252
Overall quite good. A few nitpicks...

In the = Terminology section:

Paramaters can be included in = many of the Tags, Contexts or = Commands.

Should be = "Parameters".


In the History = section:

WebCatalog and Pacific Coast Software was = purchased

"was" should be = "were"

set such as Object oriented = programming using the [function] and = [scope] 

It's not really = Object-oriented (we're not declaring classes with embedded data and = method handlers). These are more akin to Structured Programming = concepts.

opted for the more supported = solutions

Perhaps=85 "opted for = more actively supported solutions"

the developers of = WebDNA that revived the language

I = would use "who revived the language" instead of = "that".


Brian = Fries
BrainScan Software

On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote:

Hello = Guys/Gals,

Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been = working on:

http://en= .wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox

If any of you = are good with grammar, please let me know what
needs corrected. It = has to be as polished as can be before
going "live" to avoid spammy = remarks from Wiki admins and/or
deletion. = ;-)

Donovan



--
Donovan Brooke
Euca Design = Center
[Practical-Ethical-Efficient]
www.euca.us
egg.bz
artgla= ss-forum.com
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